Everyone has a best friend who would
always love to talk or spend time with. My best friend is my father. However,
what if we have a chance to have dinner with anyone, who you will choose? There
are a lot of people who I would love to meet them like famous, someone famous related
to my religion or writer who dead. Nowadays, I would love to have dinner with
my father because I really miss to talk and eat at the restaurant we used to
eat at.
It is
difficult to think what will talk about. I think will talk about everything. For
instance, we will talk about living and studying in America. He studied in Arizona.
We will speak about the differences between Austin and Tempe. Moreover, we
usually love to talk about soccer. As I said, my father is like my best friend,
so we will talk about everything. There is a restaurant called “Tannour”.
It is a Lebanon restaurant. We usually go to this restaurant. But, my father
and I always dreamed to go to Cech, so I hope to see him and go with him
soon.
Good job, but I think that you have to review your paragraph before publishing it. Also, I think that you have to arrange your ideas before you start writing them. on the other hand, I like your choice, I really miss my father too. Also, I got a lot of information about the dinner "why, where and what". Keep going!
ReplyDeleteHi Ali,
ReplyDeleteI hope you will meet father soon. I Advice you to be more organize and avoid repeating the ideas.
good luck
That is very sweet that you consider your father as your best friend. I think every father wants to have a relationship like that with his son. I hope you can go to Czech sometime in the future, too!
ReplyDeleteAlso, your post is a little too short. It needs to be over 200 words, and this one is 191.
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